Thursday, July 17, 2008

Another attempt at a poem

Dad said he didn't succeed at reading the poem I attached earlier, so below is my attempt. Enjoy.

"A Summer Day" by Tom Leonard
(click on me to hear it)



yir eyes ur
eh
a mean yir

pirrit this wey
ah thingk yir
byewtifl like ehm

fact
fact a thingk yer
ach a luvyi thahts

thahts
jist thi wey it iz like
thahts ehm
aw there iz ti say

1 comment:

marty said...

Your version sounded scottish and made sense. When I read it, it sounded like I had a head injury!